Please enjoy puns, language and all the other wonderful shades of meaning as long as you're open to:

a) someone perhaps editing it (and we can help resolve things if there's an honest disagreement on what belongs and what doesn't)

b) making sure the intent and details are still clear

I think you have no worries on either case based on the example you provided. Feel free to ask your question on the main site and link here / comment if anything comes up or someone doesn't get the humor.